On week 7 we went to camp kaitawa, we all had the best week ever! My highlight was kayaking on the lake, because you got to do anything. It was pretty sad that we had to leave, but it was pretty good to be back in my own bed.
Kia Ora Hunter, I like how you made your highlight of the trip very clear. I like how your slides are very accurate, it remindes me of it all very clearly. The time at camp was very amazing and it was just like how you wrote it. Did you enjoy the walks? Because I know I did!-Ella
Kia ora Hunter, I like how you made sure we knew what was your favorite bit was. The way you described and talked about camp reminded me how it actually went! Camp was amazing and we were so lucky to go! On your slides I like how detailed the information is. Did you enjoy all the hard walks? Because I know I did!-Ella
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Kia Ora Hunter,
ReplyDeleteI like how you made your highlight of the trip very clear.
I like how your slides are very accurate, it remindes me of it all very clearly.
The time at camp was very amazing and it was just like how you wrote it.
Did you enjoy the walks? Because I know I did!-Ella
Kia ora Hunter,
ReplyDeleteI like how you made sure we knew what was your favorite bit was.
The way you described and talked about camp reminded me how it actually went!
Camp was amazing and we were so lucky to go!
On your slides I like how detailed the information is.
Did you enjoy all the hard walks? Because I know I did!-Ella