This is my quick write and I rite a lot more than I usually do.
I was so excited to be going to canine university, I was just walking towards the building when a
bunch of other canines ran past. I was here, it was amazing there had been so many amazing canines before him. Then a hand comes out of nowhere and I look up and see a human pointing to this height monitor I just made it through.
It was my first lesson. I had to lead the blindfolded lady. I had no clue what to do so I just led
her away from the cones but then there were some plastic sticks so I just walked through them and then
she fell over.
I was going to get some food and I saw this dog do it really well so I tried to do it the same, but I couldn’t reach the stop button so the food kept pouring. Oh no I failed again, not again I failed again, she looked angry. I had a look at these pictures on the wall and most of it had Ace, this cool dog that led this pack who had way bigger dogs then himself.
Then I had a flash of ideas and then when I went to get my bowl of dog food and did one of those ideas,
it worked. I had to walk my teacher blindfolded and I stopped at this brik,
and she thinks I'm ready for the test tomorrow.
The test was starting and the judge called me up first, I was so excited to do it.
The lady was happy and I looked at her and I knew that was a mistake when I tripped over.
The teacher tripped too, I knew that would be the end of my turn when they kicked me out of the building.
Then I saw this statue of ace my hero and then I noticed this lady walking outside of the gates,
and then I walked back to the window to see everyone getting a medal.
And then I see a truck that is reversing into the lady so I squeezed through the gates to help the lady,
I grabbed the lady's purse to lead her carefully across this blank to safety.
When I look at the gate I see the teacher clapping her hands, and then I acted like Ace.
Hunter, I like how you explained most of the key points in your writing. tu meke.
ReplyDeleteHi Hunter, This is such a good blog post, but you can improve somethings like putting full stops in the right place, it is really good.
ReplyDeleteHi Hunter, I like how you rite as if you were the dog, you also added a lot of detail.Tu meke.
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