Jacob was busy stacking firewood to put on the fire. When his mum's delivery of bok choy arrived. When William Jacob's neighbour pulled the ugliest face Jacob had ever seen on a human. William was not being nice at all, all Jacob wanted was to go fishing and get away from the jerk. So Jacob got all of the equipment and went to the river. And maybe just maybe he would catch a fish, how cool would that be in that time of life. So young you know.
He was already at the river when, wooh he slipped and fell into the water that felt like a freezer in process he couldn't breath. He felt like he was going to die. When he sees a rock down the river, he swam to the side that the rock was on. Jacob closed in to that side as soon as he got to the side that the rock was on he smashed into it and hard. He had been knocked out from his own doing.
Next he awoke in a small cramped space. When he sitted up he saw a man."I have been saved" Jacob said weakly, "Yes indeed you have" Jacob heard a voice say, "I am Ah Sum" the same voice said. "H-hi my name is J-jacob", is there anyone else in this room? "Maybe even my mum" said Jacob with now a worried tone in his voice, his beautiful voice. Ah Sum said "There would be, my family members here but there still in china, so I'm lonely most of the time but I still have the village" "Oh sorry" said Jacob"It's all right" "sorry to ask again but when is my mum gonna get here" "Right now" said Ah Sum. "MUM!!!" shouted Jacob in a much better tone than before. "Lets go home honey,come around for a fix up if you want" "No, no money thanks I don't deserve it that much, it's all in days of work." "Now be careful young Jacob" said Ah Sum. "Ok let's go shall we" "Yes mum, thank you so much Ah Sum", Jacob said with his mum. Jacob and his mum go home to find their annoying neighbours still there. "Oh please say your not cooking that tonight." "To bad we are, AND I'M SICK OF YOU AND YOUR SONS ATTITUDE, and ah KEEP YOUR SON AWAY FROM MINE!!!!!!!!!!!! Jacob and his mum walk straight past their neighbours their mouths wide open. THE END. Hope you enjoyed this story about Bok Choy.
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